Story - written by Tar-Avatar


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  1. AvatarOctober 8, 2011 at 12:31 PM

    silly nee climax super keka neelonu talent undhi silly come on carry on mari nuvvu kooda oka story rasi pampu

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  2. sillyOctober 8, 2011 at 1:11 PM

    Silly: Akhil kanniti chukkalu akkada unna raayi pina padi, devakanya ki vimukthi kalgutundi, amme tanki akhil help chesadu so, ahkil ki oka varam istaundi, so that akhil chinna ga ayyi guhaloki velli ananyan

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  3. sillyOctober 8, 2011 at 1:13 PM

    Silly: Akhil kanniti chukkalu akkada unna raayi pina padi, devakanya ki vimukthi kalgutundi, amme tanki akhil help chesadu so, ahkil ki oka varam istaundi, so that akhil chinna ga ayyi guhaloki velli ananyan

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  4. AnonymousOctober 9, 2011 at 12:59 PM

    wow.... nxt post plzzzz..........................

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  5. kOctober 9, 2011 at 3:51 PM

    hi avatar kaka ra
    nu great
    ne lo chala talent unadi
    all the best next story kosamu waite chastu ne "k"

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  6. AnonymousOctober 9, 2011 at 4:14 PM

    chala bavundi super d keka.kani e story lo anusha ne peru anduku pettavu?vere perlu dorakaleda. swarna anusha lanti names nijamga bavunnayi
    proceed

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  7. AnonymousOctober 10, 2011 at 10:42 PM

    Neethu Neeharika:akhil karchina kanniti chukkalaku marindha sekthi

    vachi naa priyuralini ippudu dhakkinchukoka pote naa preyasini

    yeppatiki dhakinchukolenu ani devudu oktariga unna thanaku okka rekkala

    gurranni isthadu tana preyasini kapadukomani ventanai thana preyasinu

    kapadukovalani bayalu derthadu thana preyasi raktam madugulatho kinna

    spruha tho padukoni undhi tana chethini pattukoni ethukoni rekkala

    gurram meedha tana mudhu kurchopettukuntadu akkadi nunchi paiki velthu

    thana preyasi ni kannititho chusthu tanatho techukuntunnadu

    padhapadutunna akhil ni devudu chusi tana preyuralu raktham madugulatho

    badhapadutunna tana raktham madugulanu mayam chesthadu vella prema

    devathulu chusi vellidhariki okka varam koruko ani auntaru velli

    korukunna aa varam malli mammalnu jenma jenmalu elanai premikuluga

    brathikinchandi ani akhil korukuntadu tana preyasi anandam tho

    namaskaristuntadhi devathalaku... :)

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  8. AnonymousOctober 10, 2011 at 10:53 PM

    Neethu Neeharika:akhil karchina kanniti chukkalaku marintha sekthi

    vachi naa priyuralini ippudu dhakkinchukoka pote naa preyasini

    yeppatiki dhakinchukolenu ani devudu oktariga unna thanaku okka rekkala

    gurranni isthadu tana preyasini kapadukomani ventanai thana preyasinu

    kapadukovalani bayalu derthadu thana preyasi raktam madugulatho kindha

    spruha tho padukoni undhi tana chethini pattukoni ethukoni rekkala

    gurram meedha tana mudhu kurchopettukuntadu akkadi nunchi paiki velthu

    thana preyasi ni kannititho chusthu tanatho techukuntunnadu

    badhapadutunna akhil ni devudu chusi tana preyuralu raktham madugulatho

    badhapadutunna tana raktham madugulanu mayam chesthadu vella premanu

    devathulu chusi vellidharini okka varam korukomani auntaru velli

    korukunna aa varam malli mammalnu jenma jenmalu elanai premikuluga

    brathikinchandi ani akhil korukuntadu tana preyasi anandam tho

    namaskaristuntadhi devathalaku... :)

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  9. AvatarOctober 11, 2011 at 5:41 PM

    neethuuuu sister nee story keka super bale undhi nee climax.....hahaha

    naaa climax comedy ga untundhi .

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  10. rajOctober 13, 2011 at 1:31 PM

    avtar emta speling mistakes teluguni kunee chesav baga

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  11. cronikalJune 11, 2012 at 6:45 AM

    wow avatar jee me story super,,,
    next story appudu mari

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